EagleRock's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Patch & Scurvy]

Well, I liked it

Good short...a good run of these will make for quite the collection!

TheMythicBrother responds:

Cheers for the nice review. And don't worry you will almost definetly see more of these in the fututre.

[Transgenesis Preview]

Wow

You want tips on how to make this better?

Finish it. That's it. This is too good to critique. Just finish it up!

[The Dance - Ink Girl]

Hmm...

Well, it wasn't really interesting, but hey- great FBF animation. I can't blam someone that knows what they're doing, so great job!

Use those flash skills on something NG will really appreciate, and I'm sure you'll get rave reviews!

Good luck!

[Creating Cool Gradients]

Perfect

I really needed to know this...I need to make a flash for work and I was having problems with gradients. This has helped me get my work done. Thanks a lot!!

[Bluemen Battle!]

Much Better

I'll admit I was one of the ones that blammed your initial submission. However, you really added to it and gave it more depth. However, there is always room for improvement...

For instance, if you're going to have bullets visible in a flash, make it in bullet time (try to make it apparent you're in bullet time with slow-mo effects or something).

Other than that, it worked! Your animation was not bad! I hope to see more from you!

Chrome-Demon responds:

Thanks for the ideas with the making bullet time more apparnet, just to let you all know I made the bullets slow so they could interact mroe with the piece... unlike at the end where all you got were exploding peopel everywhere that you couldn't figure out. But thank you I am thinking about making a series of these but most series go down the crapper so we shall see....

[Wolfboy]

I'll be honest...

I normally HATE clay animation on NG. Most of them suck.

However, you really showed what claymation should look like. This is what it's about. I LOVED it! Thanks for the great flash!

[m.f.c:...trailor]

Excellent Animation

Such a great skateboard stick flash movie! I love it!

Two quick critiques:

I thought your "camera view" was not too good, as the action was way on the bottom of the screen. I don't know what kind of effect you were going for, but it was kind of annoying to have the action way at the bottom of the screen, occasionally getting cut off.

Next, I suggest making a longer flash in the same fashion. You really are onto something big and I'd love to see your work succeed. I wish you good luck!

[dancing don 2.0]

Sweet

I don't even know your principal and this is funny.

Great job!

P.S. - Nice animation!

[Perspective XTC-03]

Excellent!

Excellent use (or should I say abuse?) of perspective art.

And you animated it, too!

You, sir, win.

Champu responds:

lol ok.. thanks for the review/vote.

[Bluemen Battle]

Interesting

I'd like to see more...I think a longer flash of this would definately do good on NG.

Quick suggestions:

- More weapons (which you probably will have anyway)
- Have the two bluemen fight over a larger area
- Add a storyline (or at least a backstory)

Good luck!