Interesting
I'll be the first to say that this will probably get blammed due to people not being able to see past poor graphics, but the fact is you have a nice flash here. I thought it was good and it really portrayed your feelings well.
I really hope this doesn't get blammed and that others can see the same.
For the future, I would say try to improve your graphics a bit, as it will help people enjoy your flash. You seem to have an excellent grasp of a storyline, so you need no help there. Otherwise, I recommend better backgrounds and a larger flash window size.
Good luck with this flash getting submitted, and good luck in the future!